When the Bough Breaks

...While it isn't the thing I would ever, ever, EVER want to read, I have to say it is a pretty well-done narrative. I cannot believe that someone could write something like that, mostly because I am less... crazy?


Please stick to just drawings.

Had I written this, I would be really offended right now. And I'm usually very open to criticism.

Anyway, aside from everything everyone else has said...this takes every single thought of vengeance and anger anyone has ever felt and lets it go smoothly; not something I see too often. I almost felt empathy in reading this, though I know I've never felt anything to such a degree...great job.