2008-07-31, 10:52 AM
Organization of different panels: 7/10 Try making them closer together
Fighting: 8/10 most of the time i have no idea what theyre doing.
Storyline: 3/10 it reminds me of the movie tron where i had no idea what in the world was going on the whole movie.
Misc: 6/10 dont just post a few links to your comic, take the photobucket pics and copy the bottom text and post it here. I dont like having to click several links.
Overall: 6/10 nice but you could have done better easily, needs work.
Fighting: 8/10 most of the time i have no idea what theyre doing.
Storyline: 3/10 it reminds me of the movie tron where i had no idea what in the world was going on the whole movie.
Misc: 6/10 dont just post a few links to your comic, take the photobucket pics and copy the bottom text and post it here. I dont like having to click several links.
Overall: 6/10 nice but you could have done better easily, needs work.