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The Unforgiven Ones. [User-Controlled tale]
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AngelSL Wrote:[x] "Where am I, and how did I end up in this hut?"

P.S. is the character hot/cute? >_>

...shes a roughly 16 year old girl in WWII era germany, so, use your imagination. i dont intend to give the main character much detail, insofar as extraneous information that isnt needed.i will say, however, say she has dirty blonde hair and is a girl.

and @Throws: always appreciate the criticisms, pointers, what have you, and i will make note of that for future reference. i am many times a victim of the comma splice. (goes to re-edit that paragraph now.)
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The Unforgiven Ones. [User-Controlled tale] - by TøbiasBlack - 2009-10-02, 04:29 PM

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