2009-09-23, 04:03 AM
MasPan Wrote:[color="#cc8899"][x]surrender to the arms will and be pulled into the void.
A plot point I would make note of - someone ought to be very familiar with the voice of their boy/girlfriend, so you may want to add an explanation for why Abby couldn't determine whose voice it was.[/COLOR]
do you mean towards the beginning? she couldnt make out the voice that was calling out to her because she was confined and barricaded into a small room in a large abandoned factory with many old and decrepit machines strewn about, as well as various other effects from the day it was abandoned to present. no real plot point, the others were just too far away to be able to be heard clearly and identified.