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The Unforgiven Ones. [User-Controlled tale]
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[color="#cc8899"][x]surrender to the arms will and be pulled into the void.


A plot point I would make note of - someone ought to be very familiar with the voice of their boy/girlfriend, so you may want to add an explanation for why Abby couldn't determine whose voice it was.[/COLOR]
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The Unforgiven Ones. [User-Controlled tale] - by MasPan - 2009-09-23, 03:28 AM

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