Throes' Sketchbook of Doom

Thank you both of you! I want more of this. YOU HEAR ME FELLOW SOUTHPERRIANS, I WANT YOU TO PICK APART THE MISTAKES IN MY ARTWORK UNTIL YOU NO LONGER CONSIDER IT TO BE EVEN REMOTELY AESTHETICALLY APPEALING BECAUSE ALL YOU SEE IS MISTAKES.

Because it'll help me get better.

Well... errr.... hmm... how can I say this... well... you see... bigger boobs.

Har, har, I'm kidding.

Just some things I noticed in the coloring of bang coulai:
- One of the guns has no shading. As well as the straps from the pants.
- Try to make the shading in metal objects have a bigger difference in luminosity.
- Add a lighter tone of shading to the hair, so it ends up with three shades, like the goggles.
- In the hair shading, try doing spikes instead of bumps.

On sassy coulai:
- Nothing. It's outstanding!
- Well, maybe some shading on the shoes. : P

That's it, I don't know if anyone can understand what I just typed, though. : |

Keep going, Throws! Make more awesome stuff!