2009-07-21, 01:43 PM
[COLOR="RoyalBlue"]Well for critiquing, I guess I'll just mention things that seem a bit odd to me.
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- The right shoulder / upper arm looks odd. I don't know how to describe it. It should connect a bit lower to the shoulder right? Since we're looking at the character head on.
- The left arm looks like its missing something. Maybe a bit off in perspective?
- The bottom gun in her left hand is tilted ->, so the right barrels should be more covered than the left ones
- The upper gun and her hand look 2D
- Her hair accessory looks a bit 2D
- I'm not too certain about shading, but shouldn't there be a shadow for her arm / the gun on her shirt / torso / stomach area? Also, I think the little hole / tear in her shirt should be reflected in the shading under it, assuming the light is coming from the top left.


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