2009-07-09, 12:33 PM
Challenger
The walls are closing in
The dark is over the light.
There are barriers on my way
My way to life thats bright.
But amidst the setbacks
And obstacles on the way,
My hearts on the right track
And prepared for the next day.
Theres no room for fear
Or tears on my path.
Whatever I do, I trust myself.
I will survive my enemies wrath.
No matter the rain or storms on the way
The wind will be there to guide me.
My courage is greatly overflowing
As vast as the sky and the sea.
Every challenge I encounter,
I will fight and win.
Every walls I run into,
I will break and go between.
There may be rivals
And all other competitors
But Im more inspired
To be one of the victors!
This never-ending journey
Just gets better and better!
When there are challenges,
I become tougher and tougher!
Let it rain, let it shine
Let there be no light.
I will still run and run
For the night skys starlight!
If I could fly high,
What a joy it could be!
Lets dash to the clouds,
With those birds, so free!
Challenger, go on!
Advance to that path thats everlasting!
Aim for the sky, fear not the dark
The bud of your dreams is, hey, growing!
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This was my first serious poem...
So... it needs comments and constructive criticisms
Other poems:
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The walls are closing in
The dark is over the light.
There are barriers on my way
My way to life thats bright.
But amidst the setbacks
And obstacles on the way,
My hearts on the right track
And prepared for the next day.
Theres no room for fear
Or tears on my path.
Whatever I do, I trust myself.
I will survive my enemies wrath.
No matter the rain or storms on the way
The wind will be there to guide me.
My courage is greatly overflowing
As vast as the sky and the sea.
Every challenge I encounter,
I will fight and win.
Every walls I run into,
I will break and go between.
There may be rivals
And all other competitors
But Im more inspired
To be one of the victors!
This never-ending journey
Just gets better and better!
When there are challenges,
I become tougher and tougher!
Let it rain, let it shine
Let there be no light.
I will still run and run
For the night skys starlight!
If I could fly high,
What a joy it could be!
Lets dash to the clouds,
With those birds, so free!
Challenger, go on!
Advance to that path thats everlasting!
Aim for the sky, fear not the dark
The bud of your dreams is, hey, growing!
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This was my first serious poem...
So... it needs comments and constructive criticisms
Other poems:
Spoiler
:]