2009-06-23, 05:29 PM
Just some small errors that I see:
Shouldn't it be 'these'?
I'm not sure what you're trying to say right here, maybe you worded it weird?
[x] Try getting more information from Clinton.
It's worth a shot, Mel's Dad works for NewFuture after all...
FelixTM Wrote:"Eh... I don't know. I was ready to turn this guys in without a second thought, but now I really want to know everything they can tell me.
Shouldn't it be 'these'?
FelixTM Wrote:"It could also just be a very tiny device, you know."
"I realize that. It's probably more likely. Something like that would have been easy for Dad to use on my mom, too. Slip it wherever while she's sleeping."
I'm not sure what you're trying to say right here, maybe you worded it weird?
[x] Try getting more information from Clinton.
It's worth a shot, Mel's Dad works for NewFuture after all...