2009-06-23, 07:02 AM
okay, things i would change;
'SS' change to 'screenshot'
not once did you say 'Knight of Cygnus'.
change 'ToC' to 'Table of Contents'
explain what an 'order character' is.
"talk to your Knight Commander (see above)" nothing above on 'Knight Commanders'.
i wasnt flaming, or disrespecting your guide, those are just some things i noted which would make the guide easier to read and take in, and will make it look better and more professional.
'SS' change to 'screenshot'
not once did you say 'Knight of Cygnus'.
change 'ToC' to 'Table of Contents'
explain what an 'order character' is.
"talk to your Knight Commander (see above)" nothing above on 'Knight Commanders'.
i wasnt flaming, or disrespecting your guide, those are just some things i noted which would make the guide easier to read and take in, and will make it look better and more professional.