Opinions and Critiques on this Outlaw build.

Doesn't seem bad at all. Only question I'd ask is why you'd have more than 1 point into Flamethrower before you nearly max Octo, and why you wouldn't get Gaviota to 15 asap right after Octo 21. Then again, you have your reasons, I'm sure. My build followed a specific-pattern so that I wouldn't have 28/28 Flame and Ice by 100. I wanted to stick with Ice to freeze mobs, and get Flame at my early 100's for testing purposes, or for fun, like .. at Kents!

Other than that, your build seems fine. 9/10! I can't say much about lv 28 Flame vs Lv 11 Flame or whatever either, since I'm not an Outlaw yet. Still lv 49, lol.