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My Ballad - You say no.
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It's in iambic meter or whatever. So yeah Tongue

How does one become a hero? (A)
A successful being. (B)
In your eyes, your life is narrow, (A)
and in some, your lying. (B)

People tell you, no you cannot, (A)
and tend to put you down. (B)
You stare at them with blank remark, ©
trying to hide your frown. (B)

The next time someone says to you, (A)
No way, you can't do that! (B)
Look them dead in the eyes and say, ©
I'll prove you wrong someday. ©

It had to be something about our life, and ever since middle school a lot have told me I'll never become successful. So I wanted to write about that.

Comments appreciated Tongue
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My Ballad - You say no. - by GMSInfighter - 2009-04-07, 09:31 PM
My Ballad - You say no. - by Corn - 2009-04-07, 09:31 PM
My Ballad - You say no. - by GMSInfighter - 2009-04-07, 09:53 PM
My Ballad - You say no. - by KajitiSouls - 2009-04-07, 09:53 PM
My Ballad - You say no. - by GMSInfighter - 2009-04-07, 09:57 PM
My Ballad - You say no. - by KajitiSouls - 2009-04-07, 10:25 PM
My Ballad - You say no. - by ♥Ji - 2009-04-08, 12:36 AM
My Ballad - You say no. - by GMSInfighter - 2009-04-08, 01:31 AM
My Ballad - You say no. - by ♥Ji - 2009-04-08, 06:02 AM
My Ballad - You say no. - by GMSInfighter - 2009-04-08, 09:37 AM

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