Well, the run-ons and lack of punctuation was a part of following the author's style of writing. Yeah, he actually writes like that. I could've sworn that one sentence was an entire paragraph. Also, I'll try to add more description, but the first number of paragraphs was just to paraphrase the first chapter or two as quickly as I could. When I get to the actual part where I'm changing the events, it goes into more detail.
Added more, also. I'll italicize the newly added part.
& Lol at reading it with SP's filter. xD
Added more, also. I'll italicize the newly added part.
& Lol at reading it with SP's filter. xD

