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Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13]
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2009-03-16, 05:57 PM
I have decided to give this piece a long and proper critique, I'm printing it out now and will assess the grammar, storly line on the arc, plot and general visulation impact. I am happy to do this for you, look out for another post from me. I do proper criticiques and take all details seriously, especially on how you've compermized it.
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Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Azalea - 2009-02-23, 07:27 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Throes - 2009-02-23, 11:44 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by GMSInfighter - 2009-02-23, 11:56 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Throes - 2009-02-24, 12:50 AM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Azalea - 2009-02-27, 07:02 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Azalea - 2009-02-27, 09:53 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-09, 12:17 AM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Azalea - 2009-03-09, 01:51 AM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-09, 02:29 AM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Azalea - 2009-03-09, 08:46 AM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Throes - 2009-03-15, 08:01 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by iiMarik - 2009-03-16, 05:57 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by Corn - 2009-03-21, 03:59 PM
Azalea Doc. 1 [PG-13] - by iiMarik - 2009-03-22, 01:15 AM
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