2008-07-15, 02:57 AM
The words have kinda lost it's meaning the way you translated it. =/
Here's a more accurate translation:
Mage: Wow, the view is beautiful.
Mage: Ah!
Mage: Thank you for saving me. I was scared me to death.
Archer: Why are you so stupid! Coming here alone!
Mage: I am really stupid! Hehe!
Archer: Hehe!
This is how they met......
Their days were filled with happiness......
However, happy days always come to an end
One day
Archer: Let's split up.
Mage: Why?
Mage: Aren’t we always happy?
Archer: But you should give me a reason why you like me, love me.
Mage: ......
Mage: I can't give you a reason
Mage: But I really love you, I like you
Archer: I don't care
Archer: You must give me a reason why you love me.
Mage: Because......
Sader: Because you’re very beautiful
Sader: And because your voice is sweet,
Sader: Because you are patient, gentle
Archer:
Sader: Because you are understanding,
Sader: Because of your smile,
Sader: Because of your every move......
Archer: I think you treat me better. Come with me.
Sader: You first......
Mage: Wait......
Sader: What, you wanna fight?
Sader: Don't ever let me see you again
Mage: Reasons to love her......
Mage: Does one need a reason to love?
Sin: Bad news.
Mage: ??
Sin: They went to the drake's lair.
Mage: OMG, let's go!!!
Mage: I'm going to kill you......
Sin: Kill! Kill! Kill!
Sin: ??
Mage: 0.o It's you.
Mage/Bowmaster Couple: We're just in time.
Sin: Ah!
Sin: Ah! She’s lost a lot of blood.......
Mage: We have to send her to the hospital immediately
Mage: Hey, who said you can leave
Sader: ......
Mage: You are a 廢物
Mage: Only 廢物 runs away first to save himself
(Note: You changed 廢物 directly to garbage, which caused it to lose its meaning. 廢物 means garbage, but it has a stronger meaning in Chinese and holds the same magnitude as a cuss word. I think it's OK to translate 廢物 to pomegranate, but then it'd sound kinda awkward.)
The girl was sent to the hospital
Unfortunately she had lost too much blood
The girl became a vegetable
Mage: We’re together again
Mage: Remember you asked me to give you a reason why I love you?
Mage: Because you have a sweet voice, I love you.
Mage: But now can you even say a word?
Mage: No...... so I don't love you.
Mage: Because you are patient, because you are understanding, because you are gentle, I love you
Mage: Now can you express those qualities?
Mage: No...... so I don't love you.
Mage: Because of your smile, because of your every move, I love you
Mage: Now can you smile? Now can you move?
Mage: No...... so I don't love you.
Mage: If I need a reason to love you
Mage: Now you can't give me a reason to love you.
Mage: So I don't love you.
Mage: Do I need a reason to love you?
Mage: No!!!
Mage: That's why I still love you!
Here's a more accurate translation:
Mage: Wow, the view is beautiful.
Mage: Ah!
Mage: Thank you for saving me. I was scared me to death.
Archer: Why are you so stupid! Coming here alone!
Mage: I am really stupid! Hehe!
Archer: Hehe!
This is how they met......
Their days were filled with happiness......
However, happy days always come to an end
One day
Archer: Let's split up.
Mage: Why?
Mage: Aren’t we always happy?
Archer: But you should give me a reason why you like me, love me.
Mage: ......
Mage: I can't give you a reason
Mage: But I really love you, I like you
Archer: I don't care
Archer: You must give me a reason why you love me.
Mage: Because......
Sader: Because you’re very beautiful
Sader: And because your voice is sweet,
Sader: Because you are patient, gentle
Archer:
Sader: Because you are understanding,
Sader: Because of your smile,
Sader: Because of your every move......
Archer: I think you treat me better. Come with me.
Sader: You first......
Mage: Wait......
Sader: What, you wanna fight?
Sader: Don't ever let me see you again
Mage: Reasons to love her......
Mage: Does one need a reason to love?
Sin: Bad news.
Mage: ??
Sin: They went to the drake's lair.
Mage: OMG, let's go!!!
Mage: I'm going to kill you......
Sin: Kill! Kill! Kill!
Sin: ??
Mage: 0.o It's you.
Mage/Bowmaster Couple: We're just in time.
Sin: Ah!
Sin: Ah! She’s lost a lot of blood.......
Mage: We have to send her to the hospital immediately
Mage: Hey, who said you can leave
Sader: ......
Mage: You are a 廢物
Mage: Only 廢物 runs away first to save himself
(Note: You changed 廢物 directly to garbage, which caused it to lose its meaning. 廢物 means garbage, but it has a stronger meaning in Chinese and holds the same magnitude as a cuss word. I think it's OK to translate 廢物 to pomegranate, but then it'd sound kinda awkward.)
The girl was sent to the hospital
Unfortunately she had lost too much blood
The girl became a vegetable
Mage: We’re together again
Mage: Remember you asked me to give you a reason why I love you?
Mage: Because you have a sweet voice, I love you.
Mage: But now can you even say a word?
Mage: No...... so I don't love you.
Mage: Because you are patient, because you are understanding, because you are gentle, I love you
Mage: Now can you express those qualities?
Mage: No...... so I don't love you.
Mage: Because of your smile, because of your every move, I love you
Mage: Now can you smile? Now can you move?
Mage: No...... so I don't love you.
Mage: If I need a reason to love you
Mage: Now you can't give me a reason to love you.
Mage: So I don't love you.
Mage: Do I need a reason to love you?
Mage: No!!!
Mage: That's why I still love you!