song lyric illustration

lyrics are copyright "I will glory in my Redeemer" by sovereign grace ministries but they are online so i assumed it was okay to play round with them

had the song in my head and was trying to drown out the crickets so here it is. i am still moving from photoshop to gimp so was sorta playing with some of the functions (hence some random meaningless colours on the left). all comments welcome - ideal if it were constructive cheers



it seems disjointed to me. seem that way to anyone else? how could i solve it?