Azalea Wrote:You're looking too much into it. I just began writing something I would enjoy reading and tried to fix some things along the way.my apologies
it is enjoyable
keep up the good work
edit: i am realising belatedly that maybe you didn't want people to respond (seeing as this thread was apparently hidden for a long time). if you would still like feedback it'd be great to know what sort you wanted. if not, never mind. sorry again.

