Dreaming :]

It's not very good or interesting.

Also don't think this is the right place.

Constructive criticism please?

I like the repetition and rhyming. Repeating gives power to the word repeated, and rhyming makes it "catchy".

Though, I think I would limit myself from capitalizing every first letter and adding all the periods after each line. It's both "annoying" (makes it harder to read and keep focus) and I feel somewhat lost when I get to the end of each sentence. How long should I take a break? Should I take a break?

 Maybe like this? Just an idea~

Laying dreaming about

What we could be,
would be,
and should be

But waking up to reality
of what we won’t be,
can’t be,
and never will be

I’d rather dream
but then
I’d rather be awake,
and know that it will never be
then waking up every morning to this reality

from a wonderful dream