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Dreaming :]
♥Ji
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2009-03-04, 05:50 AM
nice poem flashbyme Smile what was the thought that made you write it?

i notice you've got some rhyming going - good start!

i guess you wrote it in word07 or something and then copied it in because it's got big gaps between each line. maybe take out the extra line to make it easier to read?
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Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-03, 10:20 PM
Dreaming :] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-04, 05:50 AM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-04, 05:55 AM
Dreaming :] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-04, 06:05 AM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-04, 06:09 AM
Dreaming :] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-04, 06:17 AM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-04, 06:23 AM
Dreaming :] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-04, 06:31 AM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-04, 06:48 AM
Dreaming :] - by Vathek - 2009-03-04, 09:27 AM
Dreaming :] - by Chompy - 2009-03-04, 12:04 PM
Dreaming :] - by Nikkey - 2009-03-04, 01:58 PM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-04, 02:10 PM
Dreaming :] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-04, 04:35 PM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-04, 11:41 PM
Dreaming :] - by chrome - 2009-03-06, 10:51 AM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-06, 02:24 PM
Dreaming :] - by ♥Ji - 2009-03-06, 03:35 PM
Dreaming :] - by FlashByMe - 2009-03-08, 12:13 PM

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