thanks for the vote of support rain! will try harder 
(some of you may disagree with this paragraph: skip it if you'd rather but i'm far too arrogant for my own safety so i'll leave it in for my benefit! seeing as i have hearing problems as well as communication problems it's pretty much all a complete gift of grace that any song at all has emerged in the form of something comprehensible to other people. so yea this is the disclaimer of my heart, that it's soli Deo gloria and the song is actually nothing to do with my own abilities, or necessarily that of my fiance. i realise this means nothing to a few of you, so yea ignore this paragraph if you will.)
and my fiance is a bit busy at the moment and i don't have recording gear or a guitar... so please excuse the following impromptu recording with low-end default laptop microphone in huge bad quality wav file. felt i had to record something in response to thunda's kindly posted chord progressions.
thunda - can't comment on the chord progressions you so kindly thought of, unfortunately, though i have uploaded a file so you can hear what my thought for the melody was going to be like (just one verse + chorus). when my fiance gets a free moment i will bug him to try yours out. thanks
i know i am probably completely in the wrong key - how does the melody fit with those chords?
(some of you may disagree with this paragraph: skip it if you'd rather but i'm far too arrogant for my own safety so i'll leave it in for my benefit! seeing as i have hearing problems as well as communication problems it's pretty much all a complete gift of grace that any song at all has emerged in the form of something comprehensible to other people. so yea this is the disclaimer of my heart, that it's soli Deo gloria and the song is actually nothing to do with my own abilities, or necessarily that of my fiance. i realise this means nothing to a few of you, so yea ignore this paragraph if you will.)
and my fiance is a bit busy at the moment and i don't have recording gear or a guitar... so please excuse the following impromptu recording with low-end default laptop microphone in huge bad quality wav file. felt i had to record something in response to thunda's kindly posted chord progressions.
thunda - can't comment on the chord progressions you so kindly thought of, unfortunately, though i have uploaded a file so you can hear what my thought for the melody was going to be like (just one verse + chorus). when my fiance gets a free moment i will bug him to try yours out. thanks
i know i am probably completely in the wrong key - how does the melody fit with those chords?