[lyrics] My Lord, my God

From a completely objective view, I think it's a very good start for a song. I would prefer more verses, though. It feels too short to me right now. I assume it's a slower song? How many times does the chorus repeat? I suppose you'll make it decent length, even with not very many lyrics.

I have no interest in the subject you chose, but I admire those who can write and perform their own songs. I'll look forward to hearing it!