2009-02-19, 03:58 PM
"awake"
great short story! no punches pulled, strong all the way with a driving plot that falls smoothly into place. you can tell the writer was in control the entire time and events are fairly seamless (as opposed to description, oh wait something has to happen, plot, description, plot, etc). theme is pretty gruesome and some of the description (eg the face) is extraordinarily visceral... why do we not have a writers board again?
and do you mean "creative writing" as in a class?
great short story! no punches pulled, strong all the way with a driving plot that falls smoothly into place. you can tell the writer was in control the entire time and events are fairly seamless (as opposed to description, oh wait something has to happen, plot, description, plot, etc). theme is pretty gruesome and some of the description (eg the face) is extraordinarily visceral... why do we not have a writers board again?
and do you mean "creative writing" as in a class?