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UnknownPower · (This post was last modified: 2009-02-05, 05:16 PM by UnknownPower.)

UnknownStory: First New Town (Patch: Tespia v.01)

WARNING: This is my first area idea, and is pretty much unfinished. This will be updated as ideas (and time) become available.

BETA: V.6
-Added this region's new main name: Exelebian (Chosen by me)
-Added more robotic monsters, and soon to be explained bosses.
-Added Secret Project progress and description.
-Found dedication to add a little more lol. Excellent

Maps

Monsters

Story

Exelebian wasn't always called by that name. In the beginning, it was called "The Land". This is what the natives, known only as the Reverants, called it. They performed ceremonies and rituals peacefully on the barren land. It was very peaceful... Until one day. Chief Galloping Goat was about to send someone to his death for treason. At that moment, the prisoner broke free! Him, and several others moved farther north up the mountains. Boasting his victory, the prisoner laughed in a way that put Chief Galloping Goat into sickness. He died about a week after. At that time, the prisoner came back, and took over. He exiled all but his loyal friends from the village. Some went west to unknown land. But some came to the east, where Exelebian would soon be built! Villagers built and built and built... But nothing worked. They lived dreadfully until the day a man named "Sutra" came along. He was a bit of a dull bulb, but knew what was right. He helped the villagers build with futuristic tehnology... But once again, nothing worked. After, some of the history was erased by an unknown suspect. We'll skip to the part of Neotopia and Kerning City. Nella, who was curious at the time, wanted to see the ocean. In a case of unfortunate events, she fell in! As time passed, she was spotted by the villagers, and carried to safety. Sutra was suspicious of her, but trusted her well enough! Eventually, they became great friends! But one day, Nella was crying at the cliff. She feared that she could never return to Kerning City! As one last kind gesture to Nella, Sutra and the villagers made a raft out of the little supplies there were. Soon, Nella returned to Kerning City! She was so happy for what the villagers did, she started to build a bridge to the land mass. The project was dropped after a year's worth of work. She could never go to Exelebian again... Or could she? She could. The people of Kerning City put aside their differences, and made a ferry going to Exelebian! And it was specially for Nella! She sailed there only to realize the land was in shambles. Not a breath breathed in, not a sound for miles, not a sight anywhere! Except for a strange, dark figure. He seemed to look a lot like Sutra. But as soon as his head turned toward Nella, it was clear that it wasn't Sutra at all! He destroyed the village and killed all of the noticable natives! At a quick glance, Nella escaped. She decided to never go back again. Or so she had thought. About 10 years after the incident, Sutra washed up on Kerning City's shore. He was bloody, unkept, and unconcious. Nella was the first to notice. She cried her heart out until the point Sutra woke up! He awoke telling of his tail. To put it shortly, he said: "That figure is a relative of mine. We've always been bitter rivals for thousands of years! He took revenge by destroying the village, and nearly killing me in the process! I have come to ask for your help. Please help me build the utopia I always imagined. I will protect you from my relative's wrath. I promise. And if that promise is ever broken, I shall be sacrificed in the name of you." Nella, having been shocked from the story, stood speechless. With only a single tear running down her cheek. Having felt true sorrow in her heart, she had no choice but to accept! She called out to everybody to bring supplies and material. All of the townspeople in a rush to help Nella! They all sailed to the land once known as Exelebian. While Sutra's relative chuckled at his victory, the people built what is now Neotopia City. It was a futuristic, yet classy marvel! The structures were so sturdy, not even the strongest of wrecking balls, or machinery, could ever destroy thes buildings! Exelebian came to be just as Sutra drempt of! The city ran perfectly in harmony, and secrecy, for several years. Soon, Black Jack, the map expert of the Natuilus, found a fold in the large map facing him. This flap revealed land. Land left unexplored by everybody other than the citizens of Kerning City. Jack had to see it for himself! Less than a year later, he told of his ventures to the rest of the Maple world. Word quick spread of this new land! And now it is free to explore by people like YOU! The ferry opened up, and YOU'RE invited!

NPCs

Quests

Expectations For Next Patch/Update

Secret Project

That's all I got so far! Any ideas? Give me your ideas please! I love opinion! Heart

Just so long as it isn't a flame like ("scrap this idea it's stink you're noob"). If you think so, tell me kindly ("The idea is OK, but you could do better.") Ahead of time, thanks for feedback!! Cool

EDIT: I may be out for some time. Haven't really got to play MapleStory for a while (or have off Tongue

). So I'm enjoying the time I do have! I may change soon, I may not. Just wait and see...

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