2009-01-19, 09:57 PM
UnknownPower Wrote:You have a good start!
I have some reccomedations for you, though:
1) Add more maps~ You have a good start for the maps. But you should add more trick roads, or places of any sort.
Good point; this portion of the Korilan Sea always seemed too small to be the gap between Ossyria and the fabled continent.
2) Add more monsters~ Just a couple. You have the monsters, but a few more couldn't hurt much at all.
I have an Area Boss, but I didn't want it in the teaser. Otherwise, why not?
3) Find a solid story~ I'm not sure if I have to explain this any further.
Partially written.
Hope you consider these ideas!
Have a nice time with it!
I also already have 3 other areas partially completed, and 4 or 5 names for potential regions. The Saravim Steppes, where the last map is, is actually one of the 3 mostly completed regions.