2009-01-19, 09:15 PM
You have a good start! 
I have some reccomedations for you, though:
1) Add more maps~ You have a good start for the maps. But you should add more trick roads, or places of any sort.
2) Add more monsters~ Just a couple. You have the monsters, but a few more couldn't hurt much at all.
3) Find a solid story~ I'm not sure if I have to explain this any further.
Hope you consider these ideas!
Have a nice time with it!
I have some reccomedations for you, though:
1) Add more maps~ You have a good start for the maps. But you should add more trick roads, or places of any sort.
2) Add more monsters~ Just a couple. You have the monsters, but a few more couldn't hurt much at all.
3) Find a solid story~ I'm not sure if I have to explain this any further.
Hope you consider these ideas!
Have a nice time with it!