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Personal Story/Book I've been Writing.
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How about "Time after Time"?
Sounds cheesy but since you skipped an enormous amount if years between each chapter, it seemed sort of fitting.

Nonetheless, the best part of the story was
Quote:Raising his eyebrows, Raphael held his phone, the newest iPhone 158, to a black access panel, and the mist suddenly vanished.
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Personal Story/Book I've been Writing. - by Corn - 2013-06-03, 05:11 PM
Personal Story/Book I've been Writing. - by Nion - 2013-06-04, 01:48 AM

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