2013-03-15, 08:33 PM
As an avid electronic music listener, here are some suggestions I'd like to make:
1. Consider reading up on song structures, as the structure in this song is kind of weird. It seems to go chorus>transition>chorus>outro.
2. You song needs more width, depth, and variety to keep the audience engaged, if you can understand what I mean. Throughout the song I only heard I think 3 similar sounding synths repeating the same few bars over and over. Things got boring really quickly. Listen to the electronic songs you like and try to dissect and examine them thoroughly as to why they sound good and incorporate it in your own songs
1. Consider reading up on song structures, as the structure in this song is kind of weird. It seems to go chorus>transition>chorus>outro.
2. You song needs more width, depth, and variety to keep the audience engaged, if you can understand what I mean. Throughout the song I only heard I think 3 similar sounding synths repeating the same few bars over and over. Things got boring really quickly. Listen to the electronic songs you like and try to dissect and examine them thoroughly as to why they sound good and incorporate it in your own songs