WIP - Rellik

Since I had to met someone at 5:30 AM, I decided "pineapple sleep" and just stayed up since I'm going on a 5 hour drive anyway.

So this is what I did to kill time... busted out MSPaint and started sketching. I'm really proud of this, especially since I haven't actually taken my time in drawing in a while.

So since I'm so happy with the progress, I need to know what needs to be fixed so I can finish it. SUGGESTlONS PLZ.

Also, perspective is a peach. It's hard to do. ._.

[spoiler=Warning - It's big. Completed version will be smaller. D:<][/spoiler]

EDIT: Fixed some things that bothered me; made the folds on the cloak a bit better, made the pistol-crossbow more... round.

What you've done so far is impressive and looks great.

Theres that extra nozzle/barrel(?) thing on the end of the crossbow/gun that could be added, but not really necessary.
The frill(?) of the glove could be bulked up a little more, but thats just a pet peeve kind of thing.

I'm not art-savvy so feel free to ignore my rather miniscule qualms with your work. Looking forward to seeing the final product.

If that's done on MS paint....

You're God. Seroiusly. Nice job.

If that's done on MS paint....

You're God. Seroiusly. Nice job.

That looks like the equivalent of a pencil sketch, only with the mouse. No offense.

The details are pretty good so far however xD

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the three fingers threw me off a bit otherwise it looks awsome f5

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the three fingers threw me off a bit otherwise it looks awsome f5

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It took me a while to find your post, I thought it was empty for a sec. :f6:

But yeah, that was intended since some people draw characters with 3 fingers instead of 4. :p

I already started on the lineart with some minor fixings, thanks guys. (:

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH SO MANY LAYERS and I ain't even halfway done yet.

Just wanted to show how it's going so far nyehh@@

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I can still make changes, as long as they aren't TOO big (I <3 SAI's editing tool), so if there's anything, please let me know. I plan on making this my best 100% digitally drawn fanart. :B

Something about the arm bothers me, though, just don't know what exactly...