Maplestory Training Guide Level 1-250

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdAigqrtOS8

I've recently created a training guide and failed to post it on southperry. This isn't really about the training guide, I've only recently began creating videos and I was just hoping for feedback mainly. I could use help and your criticism on the editing, placement of text, placement of anything in fact, or anything possibly in your mind when you watch the video. I could really use feedback, thanks!

Mechanical Grave is coming out soon, so you'll want to add that eventually.

Alright, thanks alot!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cdAigqrtOS8

I've recently created a training guide and failed to post it on southperry. This isn't really about the training guide, I've only recently began creating videos and I was just hoping for feedback mainly. I could use help and your criticism on the editing, placement of text, placement of anything in fact, or anything possibly in your mind when you watch the video. I could really use feedback, thanks!

Could you add the training guide into your description for those that just want to read? :O

or maybe list the levels and time that part starts next to it? (Does that make sense?)