A lonely cat sheds a tear for no one to understand.
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As Misery Call, Thus Answer (Regretfully So)
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2010-09-05, 11:58 AM
Very good story Felix. I'm guessing we'll be seeing more since this is the prologue?
I like the imagery and can see the events vividly in my head. The coworker paragraph gives a bit more background to his misery but it feels out of place to me.
Ch 2: Loving the setting. Ch 3: I'm surprised he actually planned a date.
2010-09-11, 04:21 PM
Okay what.
Cats, waves, suicides, apathy and loneliness. I'm depressed now. Pleasantly depressed though. I blame you Kyle. |
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