New Fashion Videos - Input Appreciated ^^

Hi everyone,

After many years dedicated to maple, I have decided to pursue my passion in fashion and video editing! I'm still relatively new at this and would like everyone's input on improving my editing skills and my fashion content!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDXDPhGSi...a60Mte1dgA

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eDjmeWolD...ature=plcp

Let me know what you think! Constructive Criticism welcomed! fire away ^^

Yours,

J

Not to hate or anything, but how did you get to SouthPerry? :f6:

Hey Bluffed!

I love that you've put the effort to post videos like this! It's so time consuming and it's hard to keep up!

I don't know much about editing but it looks fine to me! and I liked the concept on the first one!

This is just based off the first video!

I'm not sure which demo', age group, style of person you're trying to target, but maybe it would be best to comment on each outfit? Maybe say why: you chose it/it works/it's on trend. and where you'd wear it perhaps? You did a great job citing the items for each look though (which I know girls would love you for!!).

As for styling, I feel as if the scarves are drowning/cluttering the pants, so maybe some scarfs should be taken out so it doesn't appear so heavy. I like the diversity of palettes through the 10 looks, but times the silhouette look's repeated (oversized top/scarfs/leather pant).

I'm assuming the smokin' hot leather pants are the statement piece! So it would be fitting to work around it rather than dilute them! other than that! I think you did a good job!



You're so cute! Keep up the good work!