oXLAMAXo a sketch

Well, just kinda improving on facial expressions and the form of the face in my wierd style of drawing. it's done in Felt tip pen then smudged with graphite.
Anyway it's a sketch of my main oXLAMAXo sooo yep constructive crit is welcome

Note: this was rejected by basil because it wasn't interesting and non maple related, while they, at the same time accepted a picture of a baby with a laptop. Nice.

I love the effect of the graphite, you used it really well here. I also like how it has a slightly creepy/gothic feel to it, the facial expression is just nice and evil. Not many people draw teeth so it's nice to see something different. I just like this a lot, nice work! I'd like to see more.

Arms look skinny, but that's Maple for you. Anyway, holy pomegranate. That's great. Love the evil look on his face, and nice effect with the graphite.

Looks like something off of the cover of a Mindless Self Indulgence Album

He's really cute ^_____________^.