MS fanart - Taking Requests!

I need to improve my drawing skills, so that's what I'm gonna do.
this first pic is of my gf's aran Apopleksy.
just finished it, shes extending her hand to receive her new and shiny polearm and discarded her old arcglaive.



I'm not good as you can see, however if you'd like me to draw your character just post a picture (made in Went my way or BannedStory)
and I might draw the char, I'll choose a pose/angle at random.

i can't see D: bu i'd love to see you try me. brb looking pic

http://i1127.photobucket.com/albums/l630...-13-00.jpg

and i can't se the pic you seem to have forgotten the link

sorry about that, photoshop kept freezing on the resizing. original pic is 12mb. too big to upload.

oh lol, np, here is my opinion on it, it's very good, i like the perspective, and in the general areas, the drawing is fine. only problems i note are the fact that the glaive is too small, and the pointing finger is a bit too away from the others. but that's all i can nitpick (well, and the fact that she seems to have an arrow between her breasts, lol)

Here:



Hand needs a bit of work, I believe you'd be seeing a bit less of the ring/little finger for this to be feasible since they'd be more hidden behind the middle finger from this angle. As it is they seem a bit fat, as if you've acknowledged they needed to be touchingin this view but at the same time tried to render each finger individually and in full view. As already stated, index finger is pointing too far out and looks slightly broken outwards. Are the 2 legs supposed to be in slightly different positions with the foot bending like that? The perspective on the legs imply to me that the feet would be roughly on the same level and flat on the floor.

Good work though, perspective isn't easy at all especially when applying it to something like a human. I suck at it too lol

First of all. That drawing is awesome!
Seconddd if you could get the time to draw either of these then i'd like that so much!
You can pick wich one would be most fun to draw. (:

Awesome pose! Just some little things i think i can help you on.

A- Her legs. I know you tried to give her curves, and that gave her a pretty hot body, but the legs are just a little far from each other, and the bottom part is in a different angle. Her legs are widely correct, but if you made them a little longer vertically it'd be perfect! :>

B- Her breasts, if you want a tip, that won't sound so good, try thinking on a naked woman. Before drawing bodies, draw them naked, and go drawing clothes over it. Why? Because when you're drawing someone naked, you can notice if you make the breasts bigger, longer, or in a different angle than how they should be, because you're always thinking on how it goes on human bodies. Her breasts are down from where they should be, and like i said, when you make those, draw them under the clothes, not just lines for them. Because lines can make they go on a different angle. :>

Just those, combined, they make her body look elongated, long in the upper part, but short in the lower part. Although they're supposed to be like that because of the perspective, some things became out of place because of such position. But that pose is simply fantastic :> If you could just fix those, it'd be perfect!
Take that as an advice, when drawing bodies, draw someone naked always, because clothes will look like they were attached to the person's body, not that the body depends on the clothes. :>

Take that as an advice, when drawing bodies, draw someone naked always, because clothes will look like they were attached to the person's body, not that the body depends on the clothes. :>

This. Always. Works wonders.

Another tip is to try and exaggerate the curves on women, makes 'em look more appealing.

Good job, though!

I always have a hard time on extending arms/legs towards the viewer:<.

Great job tho, looks smooth,not too many lines like some sketches.
I don't think you'd see that much underwear from that perspective,especially since the original character is wearing a dress. Also as said above, start off with a contour,makes it easier to apply clothes and figure out where the wrinkles go,etc. You should also see a few examples/refs to see what kind of wrinkles large breasts make, cuz the arrow is kinda off:V.

Still great tho,love the extending arm.

Here's mine if you have time to get to it.