Artpiece I drew

Used a reference, but meh.


I'm not finished just yet, so in the meantime constructive criticism?

Main thing to fix is the nose, needs to be more to the left <<<

Little bit more shading on the right arm (her right),

And it may help to add slight detail to the folds of the shirt, even if you plan to shad it all black, itll help it a bit.

Also, some shading on the neck, by where it meets the arm, will help contrast it with the shoulder, making it seem less like a single piece of skin.

Her face looks different, the eye on the right might need to be a little bigger and try not to give the lips a solid outline.

Her face looks different, the eye on the right might need to be a little bigger and try not to give the lips a solid outline.

Agreed, the eye would do good to be a bit bigger, and partially behind the hair.