MMV- Wait For You

Er... First Sony Vegas MMV? D:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C3BRmbVlu8I

After working on it for a while, I realized I made many flaws in this. It would take me too long to list them all out. But Im pretty sure there's some I didn't catch. So yea Constructive Critisim is highly appreciated, and dont go easy on me just because its my first.

It was good for your first one but you kinda over did effects at some parts.
And the male character kinda gave me an eyesore but thats me.

7/10

That's some pretty heavy effect-tion.
(Bad pun intended.)

A lot of effects are way overdone.. IMO something simple in the beginning where it's just the piano.
7.5/10.

Everything said above about the effects, plus the text color coordination is eh.