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Johns Present comic - JezzaRules - 2008-11-24
Here's a one panel comic I made after I completed Johns second JQ (which the second part pissed me off).
Spoiler
![[Image: JumpQuest-1.jpg]](http://i533.photobucket.com/albums/ee336/JezzaRules/JumpQuest-1.jpg)
Anyway any comments and constructive criticism?
EDIT: I added more stars (and more blood effects) to the image.
Johns Present comic - Corn - 2008-11-24
Hmm, perhaps insert so much ninja stars you can't even see the character anymore? You can have the blue violas at the top XD.
Johns Present comic - Five Second Pose - 2008-11-24
I don't think F3 is the proper face to use. Other than that, good job!
Johns Present comic - Russt - 2008-11-24
Like claw said, MOAR STARS.