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Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Gregory - 2011-04-17

I'll start with my favorite:


You know how Fox has a weird way of counting Simpsons episodes? They refuse to count a couple of them, making the amount of episodes inconsistent. The reason for this is a lost episode from season 1.
Finding details about this missing episode is difficult, no one who was working on the show at the time likes to talk about it. From what has been pieced together, the lost episode was written entirely by Matt Groening. During production of the first season, Matt started to act strangely. He was very quiet, seemed nervous and morbid. Mentioning this to anyone who was present results in them getting very angry, and forbidding you to ever mention it to Matt. I first heard of it at an event where David Silverman was speaking. Someone in the crowd asked about the episode, and Silverman simply left the stage, ending the presentation hours early. The episode's production number was 7G06, the title was Dead Bart. The episode labeled 7G06, Moaning Lisa, was made later and given Dead Bart's production code to hide the latter's existence.

In addition to getting angry, asking anyone who was on the show about this will cause them to do everything they can to stop you from directly communicating with Matt Groening. At a fan event, I managed to follow him after he spoke to the crowd, and eventually had a chance to talk to him alone as he was leaving the building. He didn't seem upset that I had followed him, probably expected a typical encounter with an obsessive fan. When I mentioned the lost episode though, all color drained from his face and he started trembling. When I asked him if he could tell me any details, he sounded like he was on the verge of tears. He grabbed a piece of paper, wrote something on it, and handed it to me. He begged me never to mention the episode again. The piece of paper had a website address on it, I would rather not say what it was, for reasons you'll see in a second. I entered the address into my browser, and I came to a site that was completely black, except for a line of yellow text, a download link. I clicked on it, and a file started downloading. Once the file was downloaded, my computer went crazy, it was the worst virus I had ever seen. System restore didn't work, the entire computer had to be rebooted. Before doing this though, I copied the file onto a CD. I tried to open it on my now empty computer, and as I suspected, there was an episode of The Simpsons on it.

The episode started off like any other episode, but had very poor quality animation. If you've seen the original animation for Some Enchanted Evening, it was similar, but less stable. The first act was fairly normal, but the way the characters acted was a little off. Homer seemed angrier, Marge seemed depressed, Lisa seemed anxious, Bart seemed to have genuine anger and hatred for his parents.

The episode was about the Simpsons going on a plane trip, near the end of the first act, the plane was taking off. Bart was fooling around, as you'd expect. However, as the plane was about 50 feet off the ground, Bart broke a window on the plane and was sucked out.

At the beginning of the series, Matt had an idea that the animated style of the Simpsons' world represented life, and that death turned things more realistic. This was used in this episode. The picture of Bart's corpse was barely recognizable, they took full advantage of it not having to move, and made an almost photo-realistic drawing of his dead body.

Act one ended with the shot of Bart's corpse. When act two started, Homer, Marge, and Lisa were sitting at their table, crying. The crying went on and on, it got more pained, and sounded more realistic, better acting than you would think possible. The animation started to decay even more as they cried, and you could hear murmuring in the background. The characters could barely be made out, they were stretching and blurring, they looked like deformed shadows with random bright colors thrown on them. There were faces looking in the window, flashing in and out so you were never sure what they looked like. This crying went on for all of act two.

Act three opened with a title card saying one year had passed. Homer, Marge, and Lisa were skeletally thin, and still sitting at the table. There was no sign of Maggie or the pets.

They decided to visit Bart's grave. Springfield was completely deserted, and as they walked to the cemetery the houses became more and more decrepit. They all looked abandoned. When they got to the grave, Bart's body was just lying in front of his tombstone, looking just like it did at the end of act one.

The family started crying again. Eventually they stopped, and just stared at Bart's body. The camera zoomed in on Homer's face. According to summaries, Homer tells a joke at this part, but it isn't audible in the version I saw, you can't tell what Homer is saying.

The view zoomed out as the episode came to a close. The tombstones in the background had the names of every Simpsons guest star on them. Some that no one had heard of in 1989, some that haven't been on the show yet. All of them had death dates on them. For guests who died since, like Michael Jackson and George Harrison, the dates were when they would die. The credits were completely silent, and seemed handwritten. The final image was the Simpson family on their couch, like in the intros, but all drawn in hyper realistic, lifeless style of Bart's corpse.

A thought occurred to me after seeing the episode for the first time, you could try to use the tombstones to predict the death of living Simpsons guest stars, but there's something odd about most of the ones who haven't died yet. All of their deaths are listed as the same date.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Jon - 2011-04-17

That's some good creepy pasta. Haven't read any in a while, and now I'm kinda creeped out. :3


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Gregory - 2011-04-17

Jon Wrote:That's some good creepy pasta. Haven't read any in a while, and now I'm kinda creeped out. :3

Ever read the MARIO or Mario 64 ones?


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Jon - 2011-04-17

Gregory Wrote:Ever read the MARIO or Mario 64 ones?

I'm sure I have, yeah.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Solarboy - 2011-04-17

What the crap, MORE I WANT MORE!

Maybe the funhouse would be a better place for this though.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - MariettaRC - 2011-04-17

Gregory Wrote:Ever read the MARIO or Mario 64 ones?

This one has me curious.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Berzerk - 2011-04-18

Thought this one was pretty good.

I don't know what to do anymore. I’m so scared and I can't trust anyone.

I went camping about three weekends ago in the Huntsville national forest in Texas. Me and three friends that came home for the weekend, they are all in college and usually we all get together at least once a year, old friends from high school. For the camping trip we planned to go backpacking deep in the forest, live off of fish that we catch and animals that we can trap. We have been doing this for awhile in Texas and in numerous places, Arizona, Colorado (if anyone is familiar with the Spanish peaks there), New Mexico, so we‘re pretty much used to anything you‘d encounter out there.

It was my turn to pick where we went camping, so I chose Huntsville (more accurately it’s Huntsville/New Waverly). So we drive up there park our car in a camping park spot and start walking off into the forest. We had some laughs along the way, everyone catching up with eachother's lives. We walked until it started to get dark and set up camp where we stopped. Everyone gathered wood to make a fire and we set our tent up. And we do what we always do: try and scare each other with weird stories.

Around this time we started to smell something very faint. It was noticeable, but not overbearing. We couldn't put our finger on what it was, so we just carried on. Mike had to go piss and he walked off in the forest. A second later he come running back, piss all down his jeans like he’d missed really bad. Immediately we all crack up and throw some jokes at him. Then we noticed that he was white as snow and trying to catch his breath. He starts screaming for us to follow him, and runs off. We all get serious and go follow him, not knowing what the problem was. We start to hear a faint scream and crying in the distance, in the direction we were running. It was pitch black away from the camp and Mike had the only flash light (we left ours at the camp, he had his from his trip taking a piss), so at this stage we didn’t have much choice but to follow the light, which was frantically pointing here and there in front of him.

The scream gets closer and Mike starts to slow down. We then notice a ratty old cabin that looked like it was abandoned, except for a faint light that we could see from one of the old mildew covered windows. The crying was intense: whoever it was couldn't breathe enough to let out a full yell. We all followed Mike up to the front door and we could all hear the crying from inside. As soon as he knocked on the door it stopped.

We all waited and heard really heavy footsteps walking fast to the door. There was a giant slam against the door and the sound of a bolt unlocking. Then nothing. We waited for a bit, knocked a few more times, but still nothing happened. We walked around the house (there was no fucking way any of us were leaving each other’s side) and noticed a window, which was a good way up. Alex took a deep breath and said asked us to give him a boost so he could see inside. Me and Mike lifted him up to the window. We watched him brush away dirt and webs from the window and place his face close to the window to try and see something.

There was a quick beat. Then suddenly he breathed in fast and let out a loud scream. Then he fell back from the window, screaming bloody murder the whole way. We all tried to calm him down but he was hysterical. We went to him but he started to shake, punch, kick, you name it, and then took off towards the camp.

None of us wanted to be separated so we all ran close behind him. We caught up to him and grabbed him and set him down. The fire was dying out so I grabbed some nearby wood that we collected added it to the fire. My hands were shaking and I had to do something. I went back to Alex and we all tried to calm him down. He wouldn't he kept screaming and was breathing so hard that he eventually fainted.

All of us are terrified now, and we all kept the fire high until sunrise. Periodically Alex kept waking up, screaming just like before. By sunrise he was up and looked catatonic, just mumbling to himself and whimpering.

Me and Mike decide to go look at the cabin now it was daylight. We searched where we thought it was, except there was nothing there. Nothing at all. The indistinct smell from last night had now grown into a very strong smell of something dead, something stale. We headed back to the camping site. When we got there we found Alex had chewed into the sides of his face and swallowed so much blood that he was throwing up. John was at his back, and he looked like he was about to die from exhaustion. I guess we all looked that way, I just didn't notice until I saw his face. Alex said quietly that we need to leave. Now.

We all started to pack up the tent. It started to rain really heavily (it was about noon) and the sky started to grow really dark. Alex started to go into a panic. He went and grabbed a big stick and yelled at us to leave it and leave, now, or he‘d knock us out and drag us out of there himself. Mike started to yell at him, and they started to fight. We broke it up and finished packing, and then started to make our way back. After a little while we arrived at a creek we had crossed the previous day, only it was flooded over, and the water was moving to fast for us to cross it. Alex started to scream again, yelling at Mike for taking his time packing up the tent when we could have gotten out of here. This went on for a while until we finally convinced Alex to calm down and tell us what happened.

He said as soon as he put his face to the glass, a face on the other side did the same thing, and started to smile really big. It had dark eyes and a dark mouth which was much bigger then Alex's, as the smile got as large as it could. A giant shadow behind it swung something down and sliced it‘s face off. The face was stuck to the window, and he said it started to laugh quietly as it slid down. Mike, still pissed off (and though he wouldn‘t admit it, beginning to get freaked out), started to argue with him again. We eventually started to follow the creek for a way to cross.

We then started to see toys floating in the creek. Really old toys, old Barbie dolls and baby dolls. This wasn't like any old trash floating in the creek, though… this was a lot of barbies, a lot of baby dolls. One washed towards the side and Mike picked it up. It had some kind of voice chip that was dying and started to say some gurgling words we couldn't understand, followed by it’s sad excuse for laughter. Then it sounded like it was whispering. We thought the batteries must be dying, he threw it down.

We kept going, and the sun was starting to set. Alex was freaking out more now, and was whimpering and breathing heavily. We all started to see shadows move behind trees, something we all called BS on until we all were seeing it. It was barely light out and we stop as we see the cabin right in front of us. None of us knows what to think. Mike says “This is bull, I’m going in there.” Alex tries to stop him. We all do, all of us just wanted to go home. Mike says to all of us to pineapple off, do our own thing, he doesn't care anymore, this is all bull.

We start to hear hundreds of the same sort baby doll as before, laughing, whispering and trying to sing. We start to move forward past the cabin, all of us, and kept pushing forward. We smelled something dead in the air, something stale. The same something as before. We started to hear something crying, and something screaming. We kept on going. We eventually crossed the creek and left the woods. We get back to our vehicle and got in. Its pitch black, and we drive. We are about to get on the 45 to Houston but the road is under construction and can't be accessed. It points to a detour. As we head towards the detour it seems to be small, bumpy dirt road going into the woods.

We then see a young girl come up to us. She looks like she was in trouble, young and pretty. She approaches the passenger side door and she looks like she‘s really drugged up, or beaten up. Alex doesn't roll down the windows, nor does he open the door. She reaches for the handle and he immediately locks it. She puts her face on the window and starts to smile really big. We floor it, Alex starts to cry and scream and we are all breathing heavy. We finally cut on a street that takes us to the 45 and we take it the whole way. When we get back to my apartment everyone doesn't know what to say and we all break apart and go our separate ways.

Mike messages me later and says he is going to go back. I try to convince him not to and all he does is say it was our own minds that were screwing with us. I think he just went to prove to himself he wasn’t scared. I can smell that stench everywhere now. I don't go out anymore, I just stay in and don't answer the door. Last week everyone I met was acting really strange, people that I knew for a long time and total strangers. My own dad, when I went to his place to eat supper with him he just watched me, strangely, when I was sitting down. He didn't say a word the whole time. I kept asking him “What’s wrong?” He just slowly shook his head.

When I was leaving to go home I turned to wave. He had black eyes and an open mouth like he was in pain. When I started to walk back he shut the door and bolted it. I stayed there knocking and knocking. Nothing. I called him, his phone was disconnected. I even called the police. Halfway through the questions they were asking me the connection started to fade into static. I could hear a faint mumbling, singing and laughing.

Mike has completely vanished. There is not even a record of him being alive. When I call Alex’s house they talk to me like I’m some salesman. They say they don't know any Alex and to please stop calling. The person who tells me that is Alex‘s mother. I can’t get ahold of John. Someone knocked on my door and when I went to look I saw a face completely covering the peephole and a giant smile started to form.

I called the cops again and instead of it turning into static they got really strange. “Sir, are you affected by any drugs at the moment?” “No.” “Are you coming home anytime soon?” “Excuse me?” “Come home.” and the phone call ended. My mail slot swings every now and then. Someone is sliding pieces of baby dolls through it. I try to call people now and all I can hear is static and bad baby doll noises and this crying and screaming. My TV is busted but when I go to piss I can hear it on. I might be going insane.

Whoever lives above me started to scream in pain and crying deeply recently. I hear giant footsteps from their apartment, I hear bangs and something falling to the ground. From the neighbors to the right of my apartment I hear what sounds like a baby that never gets tended too and then it sounds like a baby doll whose batteries are dying. My phone has been ringing now and it’s Alex telling me things in a language that I have never heard before, nor could even manage to repeat. I kept getting emails of pictures of black and small colorations, now I can't even access my email. Someone knocks on the door, then they slam against it. I hear the bolts unlocking one by one and I run to make sure to lock all of them back and sit down crying.

What do I do? My electricity keeps dimming. My water, sinks, bath, shower, all smell like something dead. I keep seeing a shadow of someone behind me raising something up in the air, and I just take off to the other side of the apartment with my head against the wall. I have boarded my windows shut, someone was throwing rocks through them. I never could see who. I have boarded my bedroom in, I hear crying and screaming in there now. And right now while I’m typing this I can see the reflection off the computer screen of some shadow behind me.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Jedward - 2011-04-18

Courtesy of MetaSeraphim (not his though), Come Follow Me.

 Come Follow Me



Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Jedward - 2011-04-18

stupiddoublepostpleasedelete


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - sicnarf - 2011-04-18

 Mario 64



Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Berzerk - 2011-04-18

The creepypasta wiki's creppy images section had me leaving after 2 seconds.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Kurtle - 2011-04-18

[video=youtube;AKdftmjhMYo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AKdftmjhMYo&feature=related[/video]


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Jon - 2011-04-18

Kurtle Wrote:[video=youtube;AKdftmjhMYo]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AKdftmjhMYo&feature=related[/video]

Hahahaha. Made me jump cos it got loud. qq Best anything on the internet ever, though.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Panacea - 2011-04-18

I don't wanna watch it...


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - MetaSeraphim - 2011-04-18

Infection Wrote:Courtesy of MetaSeraphim (not his though), Come Follow Me.

There is quite a number of Pokemon Creepypastas that range from good, to bad, to down right horrible and idiotic.

Here are a few of the better ones.

 Glitchy Red

 Lost Silver

 Tarnished Gold

 Hell Bell


Some of them have gore for the sake of having gore because gore is "creepy" and "scary" but they are otherwise passable.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Jon - 2011-04-18

Panacea Wrote:I don't wanna watch it...

It's not creepy at all hahaha.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Locked - 2011-04-18

I like this thread, sir.
The pokemon ones are nice.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - MetaSeraphim - 2011-04-18

[spoiler=Hypno's Lullaby]Come little children, come with me
Safe and happy, you will be
Away from your homes, now let us run
With Hypno, you'll have so much fun



Oh, little children, please don't cry
Hypno wouldn't hurt a fly
Be free, be free be free to play
Come down in my cave with me to stay



Oh, little children, please don't squirm
Those ropes, I know, will hold you firm
Hypno tells you this is true
But sadly, Hypno lied to you



Oh, little children, you mustn't leave
Your families for you will grieve
Their minds will unravel at the seams
Allowing me to haunt their dreams



But surely, all of you must know
That it is time for you to go
Oh, little children, you weren't clever
Now you shall stay with me forever[/spoiler]

The following is what I believe to be an example of what good Creepypasta should be. Instead of relying on shock value at the end to creep/scare the reader out the shock instead comes in the middle of the story being as obvious as it is subtle. Instead of relying on gore it instead relies on the reader realizing just what happened in the story. And, instead of trying to scare you it tries to creep you out, which it does pretty well I think.

 The Night Shift

Not as good, but within the same subject.

[spoiler=Lullaby's Cave]Hypno in pokemon Firered is #97 in the pokedex. Saying in the entry "It carries a pendulum-like device. There once was an incident in which it took away a child it hypnotized." I didn't expect what I would find when I played a Fire red rom I had uncovered on the web. I was excited since I had previously lost my older version of fire red. I started the game with the
name I had once before which was "Cassie" Since I adored the name. I chose Bulbasaur as my starter and continued on through the game like I normally would.

I didn't know what to expect when I was leveling up my pokemon for the Elite 4.

I found a cave hidden off to the side and not remembering it in anywhere of the fire red version I once had. I even
grabbed my game guide to see if it was on the map and which it wasn't. I soon believed this was a hacked version of pokemon fire red I had come across. I was thrilled and I quickly cut down the trees and explored the cave.

The name of the cave was "Lullaby's cave"and it had the eerie music of Lavender town playing inside instead of the other music I had heard through out the game. It was the Lavender town music of pokemon red.I was a bit scared but I still ventured deeper into the cave.

Excited as I was I was still scared as to what I might find. After about 2 doors I had went through I saw a pokemon but I couldn't move to talk to it and it walked deeper into the cave. The more I ventured the creepier it became. As the next part of the cave was covered in fog the music seemed to turn a deeper pitch.

I was absolutely shocked by the sight I would see in the next part of the cave.

There was a person laying in front of the pokemon but It seemed to be tied down. The pokemon came closer to me and I couldn't back away. A battle scene then was triggered and It was hypno. Instead of being able to call up any pokemon hypno had used hypnosis on me. After I was asleep the battle scene ended and the pokemon was standing in front of my character. I tried mashing any buttons I could to awake my character but nothing seemed to work.

He started to drag my character over to the girl's and then he tied my character down. He stayed there as the screen faded to black.

"A few hours later..." It had read.

The cave was darker than it was earlier and hypno was holding something. It started to swing which I figured was his pendulum. The place turned red and
his eyes seemed to turn red.

Underneath the sprite of hypno it read "Hypno used nightmare."

Then the highest picthed sound came from my speakers and I had to turn down my volume. It seemed that the girls' and my character were starting to bleed. As a red line came from their mouths as they shook and after a bit they stopped and fell as the bodies started to be covered by a pool of blood. Hypno stood there and he seemed to start laughing and the screen faded to black only with his sprite standing where it was.Text started to appear underneath hypno.

It read "Oh Little children you were not clever. Now you'll stay with me forever."

The game then faded back ot the opening screen and It only had the option of New game but no continue.

Hypno is a psychic pokemon who seems to have a dark past with him. He was my favorite up until that point. I hope that someday...I will stop waking up to rope burns on my wrist.[/spoiler]


Now, finally, an example of what bad Creepypasta is. But it still got a small chuckle out of me. Not related to the other three I posted.

 Hyper-realistic blood



Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - MariettaRC - 2011-04-18

MetaSeraphim Wrote:[spoiler=Hypno's Lullaby]Come little children, come with me
Safe and happy, you will be
Away from your homes, now let us run
With Hypno, you'll have so much fun



Oh, little children, please don't cry
Hypno wouldn't hurt a fly
Be free, be free be free to play
Come down in my cave with me to stay



Oh, little children, please don't squirm
Those ropes, I know, will hold you firm
Hypno tells you this is true
But sadly, Hypno lied to you



Oh, little children, you mustn't leave
Your families for you will grieve
Their minds will unravel at the seams
Allowing me to haunt their dreams



But surely, all of you must know
That it is time for you to go
Oh, little children, you weren't clever
Now you shall stay with me forever[/spoiler]

 The Night Shift

sahfgjrhdhtyidjh

oh my god .____.


Your favorite ''Creepypasta''? - Shidoshi - 2011-04-18

 Cupcakes